Short answer: No. Based on knowledge base guidance for low-side MOSFET motor drivers (flyback diode across the motor; gate pulldown to source), your current nets are mis-assigned.
What’s wrong right now
Q1 source is on Net 2 with J2:P1 (battery side). For a low-side switch, the source must go to battery minus (ground).
The 10 kΩ pulldown R1 is currently gate-to-battery-plus (Net 3 ↔ Net 2). It must be gate-to-source (gate-to-ground).
The flyback diode is effectively referenced to the wrong battery rail because Motor+ is tied to the net with J2:P2. Per knowledge base guidance, the diode cathode must be on the motor’s positive node, which is the same node as battery plus.