Rbal1–Rbal6 each span their cell’s P1–P2 nets. Good.
Output filter
Q1 D → L1 P1; L1 P2 → J2 P1 with C1 220 µF and C2 100 nF to GND (Net 6). Correct.
Required fixes and recommendations
TVS part number: You specified 1.5KE18CA (bidirectional). The current device on D1 is 1.5KE18A (unidirectional). Replace it with 1.5KE18CA to match the requirement.
LTC4357 VDD decoupling (from the datasheet)
The datasheet states: “For applications up to 30 V, bypass the VDD pin with 39 µF; above 30 V use at least 100 µF. If VDD is powered from the output side, one capacitor serves to guard against VDD collapse and also protect OUT from voltage spikes. If OUT is diode-clamped or VDD is powered from input, use a separate 100 Ω, 100 nF filter (increase to 1 µF above 10 A).”
Action: Add a local VDD bypass for U1 per the above. In your case, with VDD tied to OUT, place a bypass from VDD/OUT to GND near U1.
Supercap properties: Your SC1–SC6 placeholders still say 256 F. Update to 25 F, 3 V and use a polarized footprint/symbol for the final MPN (Eaton TV1625-3R0256-R), since the real parts are polarized.